As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
Hi Mao I really liked your story. Thank you for reading it to us so beautifully. I also liked seeing the photo of your book too. I can see you are getting better at writing. Keep up your good work Mrs Burt
What lovely writing Mao. It sounds like you had a wonderful time at the picnic. Thank you for sharing your story with us. It was neat being able to see your writing, I could see all the clever thinking and sounding out you have done. Well done. From Mrs McGhie
Hi Mao, I liked looking and listening to your recount of the picnic. You are very lucky to have a whole school picnic, especially for you all to have a swim! I like the way you spoke clearly. I like how you have written your ideas in sentences. I like how you have left spaces between your words and that you have written many easy words and attempted to sound out new words. Well Done Mao, Keep it up! I am hoping to visit you early next term to see your lovely classroom in person! from Mrs Driver @pakurangaheights.school.nz
11 comments:
Hi Mao,
I really liked listening to your story. You wrote good sentences that made sense. Were you cold when you went for a swim?
Miss Lavakula
Did you eat some picnic food too? Yum, I'll bet you did! Great work Mao.
What a great story Mao! Keep up the great work everyone.
Mr. McClung
Noel, Missouri US
Hi Mao
I really liked your story. Thank you for reading it to us so beautifully.
I also liked seeing the photo of your book too. I can see you are getting better at writing.
Keep up your good work
Mrs Burt
@jshe I really like that you added the picture of Mao's writing on the post. I really enjoyed the story.
Mr. C
Hi Mao
Thank you for sharing your story with us it sound like you had a great a the pool and I knew exactly what you enjoyed.
I look forward to hearing more of your stories.
Mrs Armstrong-Lush (Feilding)
Hi Mao,
We liked your podcast on your school picnic. You spoke clearly and have a clear voice.
Well done,
From,
Room 3 and Miss Paton
What lovely writing Mao. It sounds like you had a wonderful time at the picnic. Thank you for sharing your story with us. It was neat being able to see your writing, I could see all the clever thinking and sounding out you have done.
Well done.
From Mrs McGhie
Hi Mao,
I liked looking and listening to your recount of the picnic. You are very lucky to have a whole school picnic, especially for you all to have a swim! I like the way you spoke clearly. I like how you have written your ideas in sentences. I like how you have left spaces between your words and that you have written many easy words and attempted to sound out new words.
Well Done Mao, Keep it up!
I am hoping to visit you early next term to see your lovely classroom in person!
from Mrs Driver
@pakurangaheights.school.nz
Hey Mao
it's your cousin Henry
My favourite part of your story is when you had fun swimming and did you eat some food?
well i'll see you later bye
Hi Mao I really like how you expland how much you like swiming.
I'll see you later bye
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