Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Mao had fun at the school Picnic!

Do you have fun at your picnic ? Listen to Mao's story and find out why she thinks her picnic day was fun.


room10@Ptengland School said...

Hi Mao,
I really liked listening to your story. You wrote good sentences that made sense. Were you cold when you went for a swim?

Miss Lavakula

Anonymous said...

Did you eat some picnic food too? Yum, I'll bet you did! Great work Mao.

jkmcclung said...

What a great story Mao! Keep up the great work everyone.

Mr. McClung
Noel, Missouri US

Manaiakalani said...

Hi Mao
I really liked your story. Thank you for reading it to us so beautifully.
I also liked seeing the photo of your book too. I can see you are getting better at writing.
Keep up your good work
Mrs Burt

Wm Chamberlain said...

@jshe I really like that you added the picture of Mao's writing on the post. I really enjoyed the story.
Mr. C

Anonymous said...

Hi Mao

Thank you for sharing your story with us it sound like you had a great a the pool and I knew exactly what you enjoyed.

I look forward to hearing more of your stories.

Mrs Armstrong-Lush (Feilding)

Miss Paton and Room 3 said...

Hi Mao,

We liked your podcast on your school picnic. You spoke clearly and have a clear voice.

Well done,

Room 3 and Miss Paton

Mrs McGhie (Keamac) said...

What lovely writing Mao. It sounds like you had a wonderful time at the picnic. Thank you for sharing your story with us. It was neat being able to see your writing, I could see all the clever thinking and sounding out you have done.
Well done.
From Mrs McGhie

Justine said...

Hi Mao,
I liked looking and listening to your recount of the picnic. You are very lucky to have a whole school picnic, especially for you all to have a swim! I like the way you spoke clearly. I like how you have written your ideas in sentences. I like how you have left spaces between your words and that you have written many easy words and attempted to sound out new words.
Well Done Mao, Keep it up!
I am hoping to visit you early next term to see your lovely classroom in person!
from Mrs Driver

Henry said...

Hey Mao
it's your cousin Henry
My favourite part of your story is when you had fun swimming and did you eat some food?
well i'll see you later bye

Tamati said...

Hi Mao I really like how you expland how much you like swiming.
I'll see you later bye