Thursday, March 12, 2009

Hannah's Cool Picnic story!

Have you had a picnic recently ? Listen to Hannah's recount of her picnic
and find out why she likes her picnic day.


video

11 comments:

Justine Driver said...

Kia ora Hannah
What a wonderful recount of your picnic at school. I'm very glad you had fun. You also spoke very clearly when reading your writing well done
from Mrs Driver @pakurangaheights

Barb said...

Thanks you for sharing your story about your school picnic. I like picnics too. I wonder what games you played. Did you have egg and spoon races and sack races. I always fell over. What is your favourite picnic food?

Anonymous said...

Hey Hannah, great story! It was fun to listen to it. I'm writing from Baku, Azerbaijan and love hearing children from all around the world. I hope you continue to write great stories. I actually come from Adelaide, Australia but am teaching here for a few years.

Kind Regards

(Mr) Leigh Newton

Clare Fletcher said...

Well done Hannah. I thought your recount was great and you read clearly.It was good to hear your voice across the miles to us here in England!

MBarrow said...

Wow Hannah. It sounds as though you had a fun filled day with your classmates. I bet you were really excited. Thank you for telling me about your picnic day.
I live in England.

Wm Chamberlain said...

Hannah, I enjoyed your story about your picnic. I think it is great that you are willing to share what you did with the rest of us. I can't wait to see your next video.
Mr. C

Room 10 @ Pt England School said...

Hi Hannah,
I really enjoyed listening to your story. I had lots of fun too. Keep up the great writing.

Miss Lavakula and Room 10@Pt England School

Miss Paton & Room 3 said...

Hi Hannah,

I liked listening to your story. You spoke clearly and your writing was well sequenced. I hope you had a warm day for your picnic.

From Miss Paton and Room 3

AngeNZ said...

Atamarie koe Hannah

Thank you for sharing your personal recount. I really enjoyed hearing about what happened and where, it sounded liked you enjoyed yourself! How were you feeling while you were at the park? I know when I'm at the park I feel happy especially when I am playing tag with my children.
I am so looking forward to seeing and hearing more of your wonderful adventures!

Mrs Armstrong-Lush

Mrs McGhie (Keamac) said...

Hannah I just loved listening to your picnic recount. It sounds like you had a fabulous time. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
From Mrs McGhie

mcclungsclass said...

That was a wonderful story about your picnic Hannah you spoke very clearly and good. Awesome Job!!!!
Austin and Ashley
Noel, Missouri US