As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
Well done Jonson for writing a great recount of your swimming. I used to love doing ring-a-rosies in the water and swimming through hoops too! I like how you have done more than 3 sentences and included your feelings. from Mrs Driver Pakuranga Heights School
Jason your story sounded very interesting. I too love to play in the pool but after a while it gets a little tiring. I like to play under hoops its very fun!
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Hey, well done! Cool story! Is this your very first story that you have read to the world?
Why don't you write another one and put that online as well?
Congratulations, Jonson! Your story made it all the way to us in Missouri, USA.
We like to swim also.
Jonson that was a terrific story! Swimming is lots of fun and it sounds like you had a really neat time at the pool.
From Mrs McGhie & Room 6
Jonson, that sounds like lots of fun. I like to play in the pool too, but it really tires me out.
Mr.C
Well done Jonson for writing a great recount of your swimming. I used to love doing ring-a-rosies in the water and swimming through hoops too! I like how you have done more than 3 sentences and included your feelings.
from Mrs Driver
Pakuranga Heights School
Great story Jonson! We like swimming in Hamilton too, but our pool has been emptied and we can't swim again until November. :-(
That's awesome Jonson, thanks for sharing!
Wow what a great story you wrote. That must of been cool at the swimming pools . Did you have a race with any one ? blowing bubbles sounds cool
NgainaMihaka r 17
Wow what a great story you wrote. That must of been cool at the swimming pools . Did you have a race with any one ? blowing bubbles sounds cool
NgainaMihaka r 17
Jason your story sounded very interesting. I too love to play in the pool but after a while it gets a little tiring. I like to play under hoops its very fun!
Jonson that was a great story!!!I like to go swimming too and it seems you had a great time at the pool.
Thats a good story Jonson!Way to go,I think it's fun to go swimming too.
I think your story is the coolest and interesting. I also like swimming its very funny when my brother does a back flip!
cool good job thanks for sharing
Jonson I think your story was good and I like ring a round the rosey
Wow - that was cool reading Jonson - Love from Mumsy
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