Sunday, April 5, 2009

Jonson's cool Swimming story.


Jonson likes swimming very much. Listen to his story and find out why he thinks it is cool to go swimming!
video

16 comments:

Leigh said...

Hey, well done! Cool story! Is this your very first story that you have read to the world?

Why don't you write another one and put that online as well?

Live and Learn said...

Congratulations, Jonson! Your story made it all the way to us in Missouri, USA.
We like to swim also.

Mrs McGhie & Room 6 said...

Jonson that was a terrific story! Swimming is lots of fun and it sounds like you had a really neat time at the pool.
From Mrs McGhie & Room 6

Wm Chamberlain said...

Jonson, that sounds like lots of fun. I like to play in the pool too, but it really tires me out.
Mr.C

Justine said...

Well done Jonson for writing a great recount of your swimming. I used to love doing ring-a-rosies in the water and swimming through hoops too! I like how you have done more than 3 sentences and included your feelings.
from Mrs Driver
Pakuranga Heights School

glenview9 said...

Great story Jonson! We like swimming in Hamilton too, but our pool has been emptied and we can't swim again until November. :-(

Craig Steed said...

That's awesome Jonson, thanks for sharing!

Ngaina said...

Wow what a great story you wrote. That must of been cool at the swimming pools . Did you have a race with any one ? blowing bubbles sounds cool



NgainaMihaka r 17

Ngaina said...

Wow what a great story you wrote. That must of been cool at the swimming pools . Did you have a race with any one ? blowing bubbles sounds cool



NgainaMihaka r 17

Cole said...

Jason your story sounded very interesting. I too love to play in the pool but after a while it gets a little tiring. I like to play under hoops its very fun!

Gavin said...

Jonson that was a great story!!!I like to go swimming too and it seems you had a great time at the pool.

Nathan and Tristin said...

Thats a good story Jonson!Way to go,I think it's fun to go swimming too.

wendy said...

I think your story is the coolest and interesting. I also like swimming its very funny when my brother does a back flip!

Dillion and ryan said...

cool good job thanks for sharing

Robert said...

Jonson I think your story was good and I like ring a round the rosey

Anonymous said...

Wow - that was cool reading Jonson - Love from Mumsy