As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
Have you had a picnic recently ? Listen to Hannah's recount of her picnic and find out why she likes her picnic day.
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Kia ora Hannah What a wonderful recount of your picnic at school. I'm very glad you had fun. You also spoke very clearly when reading your writing well done from Mrs Driver @pakurangaheights
Thanks you for sharing your story about your school picnic. I like picnics too. I wonder what games you played. Did you have egg and spoon races and sack races. I always fell over. What is your favourite picnic food?
Hey Hannah, great story! It was fun to listen to it. I'm writing from Baku, Azerbaijan and love hearing children from all around the world. I hope you continue to write great stories. I actually come from Adelaide, Australia but am teaching here for a few years.
Wow Hannah. It sounds as though you had a fun filled day with your classmates. I bet you were really excited. Thank you for telling me about your picnic day. I live in England.
Hannah, I enjoyed your story about your picnic. I think it is great that you are willing to share what you did with the rest of us. I can't wait to see your next video. Mr. C
Thank you for sharing your personal recount. I really enjoyed hearing about what happened and where, it sounded liked you enjoyed yourself! How were you feeling while you were at the park? I know when I'm at the park I feel happy especially when I am playing tag with my children. I am so looking forward to seeing and hearing more of your wonderful adventures!
Hannah I just loved listening to your picnic recount. It sounds like you had a fabulous time. Thank you for sharing your story with us. From Mrs McGhie
11 comments:
Kia ora Hannah
What a wonderful recount of your picnic at school. I'm very glad you had fun. You also spoke very clearly when reading your writing well done
from Mrs Driver @pakurangaheights
Thanks you for sharing your story about your school picnic. I like picnics too. I wonder what games you played. Did you have egg and spoon races and sack races. I always fell over. What is your favourite picnic food?
Hey Hannah, great story! It was fun to listen to it. I'm writing from Baku, Azerbaijan and love hearing children from all around the world. I hope you continue to write great stories. I actually come from Adelaide, Australia but am teaching here for a few years.
Kind Regards
(Mr) Leigh Newton
Well done Hannah. I thought your recount was great and you read clearly.It was good to hear your voice across the miles to us here in England!
Wow Hannah. It sounds as though you had a fun filled day with your classmates. I bet you were really excited. Thank you for telling me about your picnic day.
I live in England.
Hannah, I enjoyed your story about your picnic. I think it is great that you are willing to share what you did with the rest of us. I can't wait to see your next video.
Mr. C
Hi Hannah,
I really enjoyed listening to your story. I had lots of fun too. Keep up the great writing.
Miss Lavakula and Room 10@Pt England School
Hi Hannah,
I liked listening to your story. You spoke clearly and your writing was well sequenced. I hope you had a warm day for your picnic.
From Miss Paton and Room 3
Atamarie koe Hannah
Thank you for sharing your personal recount. I really enjoyed hearing about what happened and where, it sounded liked you enjoyed yourself! How were you feeling while you were at the park? I know when I'm at the park I feel happy especially when I am playing tag with my children.
I am so looking forward to seeing and hearing more of your wonderful adventures!
Mrs Armstrong-Lush
Hannah I just loved listening to your picnic recount. It sounds like you had a fabulous time. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
From Mrs McGhie
That was a wonderful story about your picnic Hannah you spoke very clearly and good. Awesome Job!!!!
Austin and Ashley
Noel, Missouri US
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