Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Leilani Wrote a story about Harold, the Giraffe too!

The students of Class 18 are learning to write descriptive story.  Here is Leilani's story about the toy, Harold, the giraffe.



Leilani Wrote a Story about Harold, the Giraffe from Jenny She on Vimeo.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Hi Leilani, my name is Kelsey and I am a student in EDM 310 at the university of South Alabama. I really enjoyed your post. You gave a great description about what you learned from Herold the Giraffe. I think it is so great that you did a video instead of writing a summary of what you learned. I also, loved your drawing of the giraffe. Giraffes are my favorite animal. Keep up the hard work on blogging.
Thanks, Kelsey

Mary Alice Pouliot said...

Hey Leilani,

I enjoyed your story about Herold. I teach first grade (children who are 6-7 years old) in America. I think that they might enjoy to tell and blog stories about their friends and pets too. What do you think? I don't have a Herold, but I could have something fun for them to play with and write about, don't you think?

Thanks,
Mary Alice

Kayla Rivers-Powell said...

That is such a great video, and I loved the story! Keep up the great work!