" Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs " is another fairy tale that the students in Room 5 enjoy reading and listening to. Ani has written what she thinks of the story and recorded her version here! Her teacher, Mrs Jenny She likes the part where she writes that " Snow white fell into a deep sleep." Have a listen and see if you agree!
2 comments:
Ani I liked the way that you made me think that you'd finished your story and then added a bit into the end, it made it really exciting and I was interested to hear how the story had turned out! I like the way that you read like you were someone speaking on Television. Nice job.
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.
I enjoyed your story very much Ani. I couldn't have told that story any better. I liked your drawing as well! You have a very creative mind! Keep up the excellent work!
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