Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Mao's Wonderful Recount of " Jack and the Bean Stalk "

" Jack and the Bean Stalk " is another fairy tale that the students in Room 5 enjoy reading and listening to! Mao has written a recount of the story which has impressed her teacher, Mrs Jenny She. Listen to her story and see if you think her writing is cool! Please feel free to leave a comment for her.



4 comments:

Mr Webb and Room 8 said...

Mao you did such a wonderful job with this story, its important to remember how old some of the people in your class are! You did a very good job of reading your story and I really like the ending, I never knew that the Giants Wife saved Jack and that was an interesting twist that made me happy.
Mr Webb, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato

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Julie Szteiter's EDM310 Blog said...

Awesome job! Great story telling :) too cute

Timoteo said...

Hi Mao,
I like how you read with expression. I can't wait to hear more
of your stories
from Timoteo