As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
Room 7 were writing stories about the ancient mariners. In one session, everyone had to pretend that they were mariners themselves! Here is one from Kyan!
Hi, Kyan, That was a good story but may be next time you have to practise reading the story first before it is recorded. But it is still very good! I like the part about the submarine and the shark.
Hi Kyan, You have learnt a lot about being a mariner. The children in our class need to make sure they put full stops at the end of sentences too. Glenys
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Hi, Kyan,
That was a good story but may be next time you have to practise reading the story first before it is recorded. But it is still very good! I like the part about the submarine and the shark.
Thank you,
Mrs She.
Hi Kyan,
You have learnt a lot about being a mariner. The children in our class need to make sure they put full stops at the end of sentences too.
Glenys
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