As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
You are very clever Cyrus drawing such a detailed picture then recording your information about crossing the road safely on video. You are right, you did read your story slowly so it was easy to listen to. Full stops are very important so well done for remembering about them! I always like to look both ways before I cross the road, especially if I am on holiday in a different country because in some countries people drive their cars on the other side of the road which can take you by surprise! Ms F, Shelly Park School
I like your picture because it uses lots of bright colours. You always need to be careful walking down the foot path because someone could quickly pull out of the driveway.
Hello Cyrus, I love your drawing. I see you following the rules. It is great how you are teaching other children what you have learned. Your lessons about safety can help others and your growth with recording videos from the first to the second, inspires me. You should be very proud of yourself and your accomplishments. I know I am proud of you! I am in Dr. Strange's computer class at the University of South Alabama. I am learning how to make videos like yours, so I will be able to teach my students how to make them, too. You can check out my blog to see some other things I am learning and to see some things my class has been doing. Keep learning! Alana Carpenter
I really enjoyed your drawing as well as your videos about crossing the road safely! I am in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 class at the University of South Alabama, and I know that recording videos like yours are very helpful in teaching other people. You did a wonderful job. I also liked that you read your instructions slowly so everyone could understand them. Keep up the great work!
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Hi Cyrus,
I like the fact that you have looked at your previous work and improve on your present one. eg--fixing the full stops.
I think your picture is really awesome too!
Mrs She.
Dear Mrs She,
Thank you for your nice comments!
I am going to work hard now on my story!
Cyrus.
You are very clever Cyrus drawing such a detailed picture then recording your information about crossing the road safely on video. You are right, you did read your story slowly so it was easy to listen to. Full stops are very important so well done for remembering about them! I always like to look both ways before I cross the road, especially if I am on holiday in a different country because in some countries people drive their cars on the other side of the road which can take you by surprise!
Ms F, Shelly Park School
I like your picture because it uses lots of bright colours. You always need to be careful walking down the foot path because someone could quickly pull out of the driveway.
Brianna
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Hi Cyrus a nice story about learnig to crossing the road.
Hi Cyrus, I liked the way you had a clear voice. I also like your picture because you have lots of different colours. From Dante.
Hello Cyrus,
I love your drawing. I see you following the rules. It is great how you are teaching other children what you have learned. Your lessons about safety can help others and your growth with recording videos from the first to the second, inspires me. You should be very proud of yourself and your accomplishments. I know I am proud of you! I am in Dr. Strange's computer class at the University of South Alabama. I am learning how to make videos like yours, so I will be able to teach my students how to make them, too. You can check out my blog to see some other things I am learning and to see some things my class has been doing. Keep learning!
Alana Carpenter
Hi Cyrus,
I really enjoyed your drawing as well as your videos about crossing the road safely! I am in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 class at the University of South Alabama, and I know that recording videos like yours are very helpful in teaching other people. You did a wonderful job. I also liked that you read your instructions slowly so everyone could understand them. Keep up the great work!
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