Monday, September 27, 2010

Lorenzo 's Story about Captain James Cook

Room 7 were learning about the mighty mariners and had read and listened to books about the brave explorers such as Captain James Cook. Here is what Lorenzo had written in his story.

Lorenzo's Reflection on his story:


Little Voices, Little Scholars. said...

Hi Lorenzo,

That was an excellent story! Do you know that you are getting better and better everyday ? I am so proud of you!

Mrs She

Lorenzo's mum said...

Well done Son, good to know you are learning and looking at Mrs She's are doing well and Im soooo proud of you. Keep up the good work and we will work on your capital letters, full stops and writing longer stories during the school holidays :)

Thanks Mrs She.

Leah Davis said...

Hi Lorenzo! My name is Leah Davis and I was told that I should look at your great videos! I am a college student at the University of South Alabama and I am in a technology class referred to as EDM310. I really enjoyed your story on Captain Cook! I've always heard about him but I never actually knew much about what he did. I am glad I got to look at your story because I defintely know more about him now! Thank you for sharing! I look forward to hearing from you more. To check out my blog you can go to

Kahui said...

Hi Lorenzo,
I like your story because you used interesting words to describe Captain James Cook. I wish I can write like you!


Cyrus said...

Hi Lorenzo

I LIke your story because you had a good Captain Cook picture in your story. Next time I want to do that too!

from your best friend,