As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Another " Hansel and Gretel " Story!! By Paul
Here's a recount of Hansel and Gretel written by Paul. He thinks the little old woman was scary!
Hi Paul, I love the picture you have drawn of the lolly house. It is beautiful. I also enjoyed listening to your story while I am sitting in the airport waiting for the plane to leave Bahrain. Mrs Burt
I am so amazed they are so willing to have their videos posted. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteHi Paul, I love the picture you have drawn of the lolly house. It is beautiful. I also enjoyed listening to your story while I am sitting in the airport waiting for the plane to leave Bahrain.
ReplyDeleteMrs Burt
Hi Paul,
ReplyDeleteYou retold the Hansel and Gretel story beautifully. You remembered the order of the story well.
You also spoke clearly.
Keep up the great work,
From,
Miss Paton