As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Friday, June 26, 2009
The Wonderful Weekends of Paul, Kane and Korobeau!
Great things are happening in Room 5. Paul, Kane and Korobeau have also started to write their own stories at writing time. Mrs Jenny She had recorded their first weekend stories in the following movie.
Paul, Kane and Korobeau - writing is so important and the only way that we get better at writing is by practising it and by reviewing what we've written - that's what make what you recorded so powerful that people all around the world can listen to it and use it for inspiration! I liked how each of you spoke about what you had done, none of your seemed scared or nervous and you were able to read clearly in a nice loud voice. That was great. Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, New Zealand.
What a great job you have done telling us about your weekends Paul, Kane and Korobeau! You were very confident and had nice loud voices. Well done, I can tell your teacher is very proud of you :)
What do think of when you watch your video? I enjoyed it. What could you do to make it even better? Would holding up a picture help? Would doing it twice make it better?
Keep up the good work and practice making videos often!
Paul, Kane and Korobeau - writing is so important and the only way that we get better at writing is by practising it and by reviewing what we've written - that's what make what you recorded so powerful that people all around the world can listen to it and use it for inspiration! I liked how each of you spoke about what you had done, none of your seemed scared or nervous and you were able to read clearly in a nice loud voice. That was great.
ReplyDeleteMr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, New Zealand.
What a great job you have done telling us about your weekends Paul, Kane and Korobeau!
ReplyDeleteYou were very confident and had nice loud voices. Well done, I can tell your teacher is very proud of you :)
From Rachel
Room 9 Nelson Central School
Hi Paul,Kane and Korobeau.I liked how you had exspresion and told what you done in the holidays.Good holiday at ryding your horse korobeau.
ReplyDeleteWhat do think of when you watch your video? I enjoyed it. What could you do to make it even better? Would holding up a picture help? Would doing it twice make it better?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work and practice making videos often!