As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Friday, May 1, 2009
Taofaoata's Swimming Story!
What do you do at at a swimming lesson ? Listen to Taofaoata's story and find out what she did in her swimming lesson.
Great story about swimming Taofaoata! You are a great reader too. Do you like swimming? Our grade two students are about to start swimming next week. They are very excited about it.
What a wonderful recount of your swimming lesson. I'm glad that you can float like a starfish, that is a very important first skill to have in swimming. I wonder what you will try next time you go to the pools? from Mrs Driver @Pakuranga Heights School
What a great story. It sounds like you had fun in the pool. I like to float in the water too. Do you like to do starfish on your back or on your front?
Dear Ata, You read your swimming recount very clearly. I can tell that you really like swimming lessons. Can you float like a starfish on your back? Swimming is lots of fun. Love from Mrs Jarman
I like the way you helped make a picture in my head by saying that 'you walked in a straight line' - rather than you just walked. You told me the 'how', which means you helped me understand what you did. Thanks for sharing
I really liked your video and story about swimming. I bet you like to go swimming, don't you? I am on my way to France. I like to go to France so I try and go every year.
Great story about swimming Taofaoata! You are a great reader too. Do you like swimming? Our grade two students are about to start swimming next week. They are very excited about it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful recount of your swimming lesson. I'm glad that you can float like a starfish, that is a very important first skill to have in swimming. I wonder what you will try next time you go to the pools?
ReplyDeletefrom Mrs Driver @Pakuranga Heights School
Taofaoata,
ReplyDeleteYou do lots of interesting things in your swimming lesson. Which is your favourite?
What a great story. It sounds like you had fun in the pool. I like to float in the water too. Do you like to do starfish on your back or on your front?
ReplyDeleteMr F
Fantastic! you are a star in more ways than one!
ReplyDeleteDear Ata,
ReplyDeleteYou read your swimming recount very clearly. I can tell that you really like swimming lessons. Can you float like a starfish on your back? Swimming is lots of fun.
Love from Mrs Jarman
I like your recount about swimming it was great!!!
ReplyDeleteI like you writing.
Sadera
Melville Intermediate School
I like the way you helped make a picture in my head by saying that 'you walked in a straight line' - rather than you just walked. You told me the 'how', which means you helped me understand what you did.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing
I really liked your video and story about swimming. I bet you like to go swimming, don't you? I am on my way to France. I like to go to France so I try and go every year.
ReplyDeleteKeep up your good work!
Hi Taofaoata, I really liked your story about swimming.
ReplyDeleteI like swimming too. Are you good at swimming? You must be good if you like swimming.
Keep up the good work.
Chante.