As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Tuesday, May 5, 2009
Jennifer Loves her Mum!!
Why is your mum special to you ? Jennifer's mum has an extra special place for her. Listen to her story and find out why her mum is that special!
Hi Jennifer, Well done with your writing about your mum. I have dark brown/black hair too with some white bits in it. You are lucky that mum lets you go to the park. I am looking forward to coming and visiting you and your class on Thursday! I am coming to see all the wonderful writing that your class is doing. See you then! Mrs Driver @Pakuranga Heights School
Jennifer, I liked the way that before you started reading your story that you started with a big deep breath! I also liked the way at the end that you finished with a little smile, it is nice to think that you were smiling at all the people that were listening to your story. For Mothers Day I think you should show your Mum this video as it would make her happy and she would be proud of how you spoke and well you did. Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton.
I enjoyed your video about your mum. We call people with white and black hair people who have "salt and pepper" hair. Mine is almost all white. I think I am probably a lot older than your mum.
Hi Jennifer,
ReplyDeleteWell done with your writing about your mum. I have dark brown/black hair too with some white bits in it. You are lucky that mum lets you go to the park. I am looking forward to coming and visiting you and your class on Thursday! I am coming to see all the wonderful writing that your class is doing.
See you then!
Mrs Driver @Pakuranga Heights School
Jennifer,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way that before you started reading your story that you started with a big deep breath! I also liked the way at the end that you finished with a little smile, it is nice to think that you were smiling at all the people that were listening to your story. For Mothers Day I think you should show your Mum this video as it would make her happy and she would be proud of how you spoke and well you did.
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton.
Hi Jennifer,
ReplyDeleteYou spoke very clearly in your story and I liked the way you told us about your mum. Keep up the great writing.
Miss Lavakula
Hi Jennifer - What a cool way to be able to share how much you love your mum with other people. You spoke very well.
ReplyDeleteMs Fothergill; Room 10 Raumati Beach School
Jennifer,
ReplyDeleteYou spoke very clearly and I really liked listening to your story
Mr Borgert
Coffs Harbour High School (Australia)
P.S My two boys Matthew & Sam really like your story too!
That's so sweet!
ReplyDeleteLeeza
I enjoyed your video about your mum. We call people with white and black hair people who have "salt and pepper" hair. Mine is almost all white. I think I am probably a lot older than your mum.
ReplyDeleteThanks again.