As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
Angalo - I really liked how you used a Racehorse to explain what makes a good rugby player. That made me think about the player running fast like a horse and making sure that they did the right thing and were training hard. I wonder if Mrs She can run fast like a horse? Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.
My name is Ramsey Willis and I come to you from the University of South Alabama in the United States. I am in the EDM310 class here and just wanted to leave a brief comment for you on your blog post.
I think your vodcast was excellent. You did a really good job explaining what you need to do to be a top Rugby player. When you stated that you need to be "fit like a race horse and eat healthy food everyday" it gave me a great picture of how athletically fit those guys have to be. I would like to say that I could get out there and play with them but at this point, I simply can’t say that. I will not compare myself to a race horse now but hopefully I can say that I am as fit as a race horse in the near future.
That was an excellent post Angelo. Keep up the good work!
Hi Angelo I am a student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. Being a Rugby player takes hard work, and eating lots of fruits and vegetables. I wonder if they get to enjoy a piece of cake sometimes. Great Job! :)
We liked the video of you telling us how to be a good rugby player. We have learned a lot about rugby this year because our teacher is from New Zealand.
Well done,
From Second Grade New Town Elementary North Carolina, U.S.A
Hi Angalo! My name is Latisha Williams. I attend the University of South Alabama, where I'm currently taking EDM 310 with Dr. Strange. I really enjoyed your vodcast! You really did an excellent job explaining how to be a Rugby player. Being a Rugby play is very hard work and recommend you eat a lot of fruits and veggies. :)
Hi Angelo! My name is Maegan and I am also a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. To be honest, I don't know what Rugby is, but I'll definitely have to go look it up now. Knowing that they are fast and eat healthy, means they are probably very dedicated athletes. I also liked how descriptive your sentences were! As fast as a racehorse is a very good mental image. Are you as fast as a racehorse?
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Hi Angalo I really liked your story of how to be a good sportman or woman. Nice vocab, Keep it up
Angalo - I really liked how you used a Racehorse to explain what makes a good rugby player. That made me think about the player running fast like a horse and making sure that they did the right thing and were training hard. I wonder if Mrs She can run fast like a horse?
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.
Hi Angelo
My name is Ramsey Willis and I come to you from the University of South Alabama in the United States. I am in the EDM310 class here and just wanted to leave a brief comment for you on your blog post.
I think your vodcast was excellent. You did a really good job explaining what you need to do to be a top Rugby player. When you stated that you need to be "fit like a race horse and eat healthy food everyday" it gave me a great picture of how athletically fit those guys have to be. I would like to say that I could get out there and play with them but at this point, I simply can’t say that. I will not compare myself to a race horse now but hopefully I can say that I am as fit as a race horse in the near future.
That was an excellent post Angelo. Keep up the good work!
Hi Angelo
I am a student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama.
Being a Rugby player takes hard work, and eating lots of fruits and vegetables. I wonder if they get to enjoy a piece of cake sometimes.
Great Job! :)
Dear Angelo,
We liked the video of you telling us how to be a good rugby player. We have learned a lot about rugby this year because our teacher is from New Zealand.
Well done,
From
Second Grade
New Town Elementary
North Carolina, U.S.A
Hi Angalo! My name is Latisha Williams. I attend the University of South Alabama, where I'm currently taking EDM 310 with Dr. Strange. I really enjoyed your vodcast! You really did an excellent job explaining how to be a Rugby player. Being a Rugby play is very hard work and recommend you eat a lot of fruits and veggies. :)
Hi Angelo! My name is Maegan and I am also a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. To be honest, I don't know what Rugby is, but I'll definitely have to go look it up now. Knowing that they are fast and eat healthy, means they are probably very dedicated athletes. I also liked how descriptive your sentences were! As fast as a racehorse is a very good mental image. Are you as fast as a racehorse?
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