Monday, October 4, 2010

Does Kyan really Wants to be a Mariner?

Room 7 were writing stories about the ancient mariners. In one session, everyone had to pretend that they were mariners themselves! Here is one from Kyan!

Kyan's Reflection:


Little Voices, Little Scholars. said...

Hi, Kyan,
That was a good story but may be next time you have to practise reading the story first before it is recorded. But it is still very good! I like the part about the submarine and the shark.

Thank you,
Mrs She.

Summerland Six 2010 said...

Hi Kyan,
You have learnt a lot about being a mariner. The children in our class need to make sure they put full stops at the end of sentences too.