Have you ever wonder what students do after the school has finished for the day ? Listen to Taeshell's story to find out what she usually.
Red Riding Hood Rap
2 hours ago
As part of the Literacy learning process, the children of Room 5 write stories and then draw pictures to match their stories. Our story writing is integrated with our Topic Studies. We also record our stories in movies so that we can share them with you. We hope you'll like our work.
2 comments:
Taeshell - I was counting for mistakes with your work, and at the end of your story you had made none! Well done! You spoke in a very clear voice and I played the video in my classroom to my students who thought that you did very well. I liked the way that you talked about all the positive things to do afterschool and I agree with Mrs She - your story is WONDERFUL!
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.
Dear Taeshell.
What a lot of activities you do after school. I liked the way you used different sentence starters to make your story interesting for us to listen to.
Well done!
Love from Mrs Jarman
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