As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
Taeshell - I was counting for mistakes with your work, and at the end of your story you had made none! Well done! You spoke in a very clear voice and I played the video in my classroom to my students who thought that you did very well. I liked the way that you talked about all the positive things to do afterschool and I agree with Mrs She - your story is WONDERFUL! Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.
What a lot of activities you do after school. I liked the way you used different sentence starters to make your story interesting for us to listen to. Well done!
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Taeshell - I was counting for mistakes with your work, and at the end of your story you had made none! Well done! You spoke in a very clear voice and I played the video in my classroom to my students who thought that you did very well. I liked the way that you talked about all the positive things to do afterschool and I agree with Mrs She - your story is WONDERFUL!
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.
Dear Taeshell.
What a lot of activities you do after school. I liked the way you used different sentence starters to make your story interesting for us to listen to.
Well done!
Love from Mrs Jarman
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