Friday, June 5, 2009

Taeshell's wonderful After School Story!

Have you ever wonder what students do after the school has finished for the day ? Listen to Taeshell's story to find out what she usually.


Melville Intermediate, Room 8 said...

Taeshell - I was counting for mistakes with your work, and at the end of your story you had made none! Well done! You spoke in a very clear voice and I played the video in my classroom to my students who thought that you did very well. I liked the way that you talked about all the positive things to do afterschool and I agree with Mrs She - your story is WONDERFUL!
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.

Delwyn Jarman said...

Dear Taeshell.

What a lot of activities you do after school. I liked the way you used different sentence starters to make your story interesting for us to listen to.
Well done!

Love from Mrs Jarman