As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Wednesday, April 20, 2011
Billy has recorded his first story and is about a chicken!
Hi, everyone! Billy has finally recorded his first story and is about a chicken that he saw at Ambury Farm.
well done my boy very proud of u and your doing really well in your reading im happy that you have gone up two levels and pick up on your spelling keep up the good work my boy your doing well and you and i can keep practiceing at home. WELL DONE MY BOY
Well done son your really brave to make your own recording of your story i think your story about your chicken is really cool my boy keep up your hard work
Hi Billy I loved listening to your story about the chicken. Did it tickle when it ate from your hand. You read your story clearly and well. Keep up the good work. Mrs Blake
I think you did a super good job with your story. I am very excited to hear the rest of it when you publish it in the future. One of my favorite places in the United States is New York. It is an excellent adventure. Keep up the Great Work.
Hi, Billy,
ReplyDeleteIt was very brave of you! I know that reading aloud is quite hard in front of a camera! Thank you for trying!
Mrs She.
Hey billy,
ReplyDeleteYou are so brave and you are confident. Russel is brave like you. I hope I see ore blog post.I like what you said about a chicken.
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well done my boy very proud of u and your doing really well in your reading im happy that you have gone up two levels and pick up on your spelling keep up the good work my boy your doing well and you and i can keep practiceing at home. WELL DONE MY BOY
ReplyDeleteWell done son your really brave to make your own recording of your story i think your story about your chicken is really cool my boy keep up your hard work
ReplyDeleteHi Billy
ReplyDeleteI loved listening to your story about the chicken. You read clearly and well. Good job, Billy.
Mrs Blake
Hi Billy
ReplyDeleteI loved listening to your story about the chicken. Did it tickle when it ate from your hand. You read your story clearly and well. Keep up the good work.
Mrs Blake
Hey Billy,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a super good job with your story. I am very excited to hear the rest of it when you publish it in the future.
One of my favorite places in the United States is New York. It is an excellent adventure. Keep up the Great Work.
Keith Tardibuono