As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Sunday, July 18, 2010
Elizabeth G's Cool Story about the Mt Wellington Trip!
Elizabeth has been practising writing her stories using a variety of interesting words. Listen to this video very carefully and find out if she has been successful!
Terrific story about your trip to Mt. Wellington. I liked how you gave good detail sentences. For example, you didn't just say last week you said last Thursday. You also gave a nice detail about your favorite part, the people rolling down the hill. Detail sentences really bring a story to life for a reader, so well done!
I have two questions: Who was rolling down the hill? And, why were they rolling? Was it a play park?
Wonderful work, Elizabeth!
From, Mrs. Y♥llis California
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Dear Elizabeth,
ReplyDeleteTerrific story about your trip to Mt. Wellington. I liked how you gave good detail sentences. For example, you didn't just say last week you said last Thursday. You also gave a nice detail about your favorite part, the people rolling down the hill. Detail sentences really bring a story to life for a reader, so well done!
I have two questions: Who was rolling down the hill? And, why were they rolling? Was it a play park?
Wonderful work, Elizabeth!
From,
Mrs. Y♥llis
California
P.S. Thanks to your class for leaving a comment onour class blog!