As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Wednesday, February 17, 2010
Dontay's Very First Story in School!!
Dontay has finally had his first story recorded and he is so proud of it! And he has also included a graphic to go with it! Well done!
Hello Dontay! congratulations on your very first story! Have lots of fun wrighting a nother! I like art'n'craft and cooking, what do you like? GoodBye! Evi. Australia.
Hi Dontay ! Well done on your first published story. You are on your way to becoming a writer! I liked how you used past tense and time words so I knew when your story took place.
Hello Dontay!
ReplyDeletecongratulations on your very first story! Have lots of fun wrighting a nother!
I like art'n'craft and cooking, what do you like?
GoodBye!
Evi. Australia.
Hi Dontay. I liked your story. You are lucky to have a lovely poppa.
ReplyDeleteWhat did you eat for dinner?
Hi Dontay ! Well done on your first published story. You are on your way to becoming a writer! I liked how you used past tense and time words so I knew when your story took place.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to reading more !
Andrea Fale
Year 4 teacher Grey Lynn Auckland