As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Friday, November 27, 2009
The Damper Story by Vaifoa! ( Complete with a beautiful graphic ).
Room 5 have been writing recounts of how they made damper as part of the writing experiences. Here is one from Vaifoa.
Vaifoa - very good recount I like the way that you talked proudly and didn't make mistakes. You did a really, really good drawing too, I like the fact that it helps add to the story that you told. Perhaps you could cook Mrs She some Damper for Christmas! Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.
Vaifoa - very good recount I like the way that you talked proudly and didn't make mistakes. You did a really, really good drawing too, I like the fact that it helps add to the story that you told. Perhaps you could cook Mrs She some Damper for Christmas!
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