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Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Mao's Wonderful Recount of " Jack and the Bean Stalk "

" Jack and the Bean Stalk " is another fairy tale that the students in Room 5 enjoy reading and listening to! Mao has written a recount of the story which has impressed her teacher, Mrs Jenny She. Listen to her story and see if you think her writing is cool! Please feel free to leave a comment for her.



4 comments:

  1. Mao you did such a wonderful job with this story, its important to remember how old some of the people in your class are! You did a very good job of reading your story and I really like the ending, I never knew that the Giants Wife saved Jack and that was an interesting twist that made me happy.
    Mr Webb, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato

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  2. Hi Mao,
    I like how you read with expression. I can't wait to hear more
    of your stories
    from Timoteo

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