As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
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Tuesday, July 14, 2009
" We Went to the Museum " by Hannah!
The students in Room 5 wrote stories about their trip to the Museum. Here is one by Hannah. Listen to her story and find out if she had enjoyed her trip ?
Hannah - how nice of you to do this in the holidays and write and speak about your trip. I can't imagine how big that a TRex tooth would be I think that it would have been quite big and scary! Well done with the way that you spoke and the voice that you used. Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand.
Hi Hannah - I love your story. You read it with a clear voice and it was very easy to understand. I would like to share it with my Year 3&4 class next week to show them how they should be speaking.
Jo Fothergill Room 10, Raumati Beach School, Kapiti
Hannah, I really liked your story. I live a long way away - halfway across the world and halfway up the world. I bet the fossils you saw in the museum were very old. I would like to visit your museum some day. Thanks for sharing your story!
Hi Hannah we really liked the movie clip you made. You used a nice clear voice. Your story was really interesting and we learnt lots. From LK & RB Room 6 & Mrs McGhie
Hannah - how nice of you to do this in the holidays and write and speak about your trip. I can't imagine how big that a TRex tooth would be I think that it would have been quite big and scary! Well done with the way that you spoke and the voice that you used.
ReplyDeleteRoom 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand.
Hi Hannah
ReplyDeleteI liked listening to your story. Your clear voice was very easy to understand and it sounds like you had a great time at the museum.
Well done!
Wow your class is really up to alot! Well all of 4/5D are very busy too. I hope to keep blogging with you in the future.
ReplyDeleteMelissa 4/5D
Hi Hannah - I love your story. You read it with a clear voice and it was very easy to understand. I would like to share it with my Year 3&4 class next week to show them how they should be speaking.
ReplyDeleteJo Fothergill
Room 10, Raumati Beach School, Kapiti
Hannah, I really liked your story. I live a long way away - halfway across the world and halfway up the world. I bet the fossils you saw in the museum were very old. I would like to visit your museum some day.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your story!
Hi Hannah
ReplyDeletewe really liked the movie clip you made. You used a nice clear voice. Your story was really interesting and we learnt lots.
From LK & RB
Room 6 & Mrs McGhie