tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8235351256130512176.post3690387350982550279..comments2023-09-20T02:02:19.768+12:00Comments on Little Voices, Little Scholars: Dontay's Very First Story in School!!Pt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8235351256130512176.post-82357169963810016782010-02-18T22:00:53.987+13:002010-02-18T22:00:53.987+13:00Hi Dontay ! Well done on your first published stor...Hi Dontay ! Well done on your first published story. You are on your way to becoming a writer! I liked how you used past tense and time words so I knew when your story took place.<br /><br />Looking forward to reading more !<br /><br />Andrea Fale<br />Year 4 teacher Grey Lynn AucklandAndreahttp://www.glsfale.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8235351256130512176.post-23546593726880869332010-02-17T20:41:18.489+13:002010-02-17T20:41:18.489+13:00Hi Dontay. I liked your story. You are lucky to ha...Hi Dontay. I liked your story. You are lucky to have a lovely poppa.<br />What did you eat for dinner?Miss Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08096923901242259200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8235351256130512176.post-21579920442952920882010-02-17T19:36:52.985+13:002010-02-17T19:36:52.985+13:00Hello Dontay!
congratulations on your very first s...Hello Dontay!<br />congratulations on your very first story! Have lots of fun wrighting a nother!<br />I like art'n'craft and cooking, what do you like?<br />GoodBye!<br />Evi. Australia.Evinoreply@blogger.com